Showing posts with label alternative history. Show all posts
Showing posts with label alternative history. Show all posts

Monday, July 16, 2018

James Review -- The Day After Gettysburg

This week I decided to review The Day After Gettysburg, began by Robert Conroy and finished by J.R Dunn after Conroy’s death. 

It is an alternate history novel where Union General George Meade is prodded by his government into immediately pursuing the Confederate Army of Northern Virginia after the Battle of Gettysburg. This leads to Confederate General Robert E. Lee ordering a counterattack that devastates the Union army, increasing the Union causalities suffered in the campaign by approximately sixty percent. After this, the Confederate army settles into occupying much of Pennsylvania.

The book contains several major plotlines. One focuses on Union Major Steve Thorne who gains command of what’s left of his regiment after its prior commander, Colonel Josiah Baird, is maimed. This plot focuses both on Thorne’s efforts on the battlefield and his growing relationship with Colonel Baird’s daughter Cassandra.

Another follows Cassandra Baird through her struggles as she works to educate former slaves who have escaped to Union-controlled territory. In addition to the threats posed by the nearby armies, she finds herself facing racist Union civilians and deserters fleeing from the armies.

A third plotline follows Cassandra’s ex-fiancé Richard Dean who had deserted from the Union Army and turned completely against the Union cause. He eventually meets with John Wilkes Booth and joins Booth’s efforts against the Union and President Abraham Lincoln.

Also, there is a plotline following Confederate Sergeant Jonah Blandon. He serves in the army when it suits him and deserts when it doesn’t or when he fears punishment for his crimes, including execution of surrendered enemy soldiers and, eventually, rape and murder of civilians. The latter incident rouses the wrath of Pennsylvanian civilians against the Confederate occupiers and leaves Blandon’s band fleeing from both armies as well as vengeful civilians.

There are also several scenes showing the leadership of both governments and the two primary armies that the novel focuses on at work, with General Grant eventually taking command of the Union forces, and launching a plan aimed at destroying the Army of Northern Virginia.

I give this book 7 out of 10. While I find the cast of characters very interesting and enjoy many of the scenes in the story, I find a number of flaws in it. While things like the horrible conditions in prison camps on both sides are mentioned, they are never actually shown. Ditto for atrocities and crimes committed by Union soldiers or deserters against civilian targets. While such actions committed by Union troops or deserters are mentioned in passing, the only intentional targeting of non-combatants you see in the story are committed by Blandon’s band, or racist civilians acting against the escaped slaves Cassandra Baird is educating and Cassandra herself.

Also, I don’t think the impact of the book’s opening battle is strong enough. Historically, the Army of the Potomac took slightly less than twenty-five percent causalities in the Gettysburg campaign. In this book, that amount increases to nearly forty percent. While it is true that the vast majority of the additional causalities were captured, even if they were all exchanged, I don’t feel that the increase in Confederate strength was properly accounted for in the course of the story. I also feel that the effects the strategy, utilized by Grant in the book, would have had on the western fronts, and the impact these changes would have made on the course of the war, were largely ignored or at least badly underestimated.




Friday, April 15, 2016

James Review -- United States of Japan

This week I decided to review United States of Japan by Peter Tieryas.
 
The story is set in a timeline where Japan won World War II and conquered the US. It opens on July 1st 1948, the day the war ends, in an internment camp for Americans from Japan or with Japanese ancestry. As the war has gone badly, the treatment of the internees has grown worse, including torture and executions, and a Japanese liberation force arrives soon after the atomic strikes that end the war.
 
However, the former prisoners soon discover that their rescuers are just as brutal as their former captors. The story then follows a couple from the camp on their journey to their former home, only to discover it was destroyed in a nuclear blast.
 
The tale then jumps forward four decades to Beniko Ishimura, the son of said couple. Beniko is widely known for having betrayed the treason of his parents to the government, and is an officer assigned to censoring portical--their counterpart to computers--games. Dissidents have launched a new game based in a version of World War II that matches that our own history, apparently created by General Mutsuraga, a renowned game programmer whose simulation software is widely used in military planning.
 
Beniko and Tokko agent Akiko Tsukino set out to find the renegade general, whose daughter, a close friend of Beniko’s, had recently committed suicide. Eventually, their journey takes them into the depths of the new world’s society, including a variety of horrible biological experiments, before they are captured by the rebels. Akiko is tortured and maimed while Beniko tries to negotiate with the rebels.
 
There is then a flash back to the San Diego Uprising ten years prior to the main story. Major Wakana, later to become a general, is seeking to bring a peaceful end to the fighting, but then Lieutenant Colonel Mutsuraga put vengeance for his wife’s affair with one of the rebel leaders above all else and while Wakana, aided by Beniko, was able to stop one strike, he couldn’t halt a second or the bloodbath that followed.
 
In the present, despite the torture she suffered, Akiko is suspected of being a traitor and Beniko rescues her from government agents. Left with no other way to redeem themselves, the duo sets out for the ruins of San Diego to find Mutsuraga. But they face many dangers along the way, including a squadron of military mecha, and a game tournament where losers are executed. And even if they survive that, the true secret behind the illegal game awaits them…
 
I give the book  7.5 out of 10. It doe a great job of blending a manga-style setting with pieces of novels like 1984 and Brave New World. However while it does a good job explaining where its history diverged from ours, with Germany and Japan teaming up against the Soviet Union before moving on to the US, there are a number of technological changes from the 1940s, and some changes in Japanese society, like female soldiers in combat roles in the 40s, that are left utterly unexplained.
 


Wednesday, December 31, 2014

More Giveaways!

I'm also having giveaways for The Game Called Revolution (https://www.goodreads.com/giveaway/created_by/17761797) and The Revolution Beyond Time (https://www.goodreads.com/giveaway/show/120758-the-revolution-beyond-time). Both copies are signed by yours truly.

Thursday, December 12, 2013

Special Promotion -- Secrets of the New World

Today and tomorrow, the Kindle edition of Secrets of the New World will be on sale. The price will start at $0.99 and keep rising until it goes back to normal at $3.50. Get the savings while you can!


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Monday, November 25, 2013

Kindle Spotlight -- Fiddlehead

Today I'm reviewing the latest volume in Cherie Priest's Clockwork Century series that began with Boneshaker. The novel is Fiddlehead.

Like the other books in the series, the story takes place in an alternate 1880 United States where the Civil War is still being fought. This entry centers around Gideon Bardsley, a former slave-turned-inventor who has created the world's first computer, a gigantic calculating machine called the Fiddlehead. Gideon and his patron Abraham Lincoln (who survived Ford's Theatre but is now in a wheelchair) ask the machine a simple question: Which side will win the Civil War? The machine returns a perplexing answer -- neither side. If nothing is done, America will, in fact, be destroyed by the zombies that have plagued the series since the first book. But just who is creating these undead creatures? Unfortunately, Gideon is not able to figure this out before thugs destroy the Fiddlehead. Now on the run for his life, he takes up refuge in the Lincoln house. In order to protect his friend, the sixteenth president calls the Pinkerton Detective Agency. They send in Maria "Belle" Boyd, the protagonist from Clementine. Together with Ulysses S. Grant and a group of allies, she sets out to once and for all find out who's weaponizing the yellow gas from Seattle and trying to silence Gideon Bardsley.

I've enjoyed every entry in the Clockwork Century series I've read, and Fiddlehead ties its various elements together to bring a satisfying conclusion to the story. The characters are likable and easy to root for, and numerous figures from past books make their presence felt. Also, the villain this time around is appropriately menacing (not that Leviticus Blue wasn't a scumbag). We finally find out where all the zombies are coming from, something I've wanted to know since Dreadnought. However, the real shining star of Fiddlehead may just be Priest's master of imagery. She really brought me into her world with detailed, colorful descriptions of the environments her characters have to battle their way through. The laundry room scene is especially memorable, as Priest makes us believe we're in hell on earth.

Nevertheless, it isn't all good. Numerous typos throughout the story bring down Priest's otherwise excellent writing. It's not anything too bad, but I do feel it holds the book back from five-star status.

Still, the book is quite good and I have no problem recommending it to anyone who enjoyed past entries in the series, or science fiction readers in general.


Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Friday, September 6, 2013

Kindle Spotlight -- Wild Marjoram

Today we have a novella by N.R. Grabe. It is (deep breath) Wild Marjoram: The Vote (Stop 1 on the Uproar in The Broken Apple Road Trip)

The story takes place in an America where World War I is still going on. Germany has taken the eastern seaboard and built a wall around New York City (now called the Broken Apple). Not only that, but they've deployed robot sentries to guard the perimeter. Majoram and her friend Jerry The Stealth have just run away from their madame/rebel benefactor Victoria with her money. They're trying to get into the Broken Apple to end the German occupation, but they really have no idea how. So in the mean time, they decide to stay with some old friends of Marjoram's on a farm. Unfortunately, these farmers aren't quite as benevolent as they seem, and trouble quickly ensues for the duo.

I honestly don't know what happened with this book. The story has lots of potential, but it's wasted by serious problems. For one thing, the dialogue is awkward and typos crop of frequently, as if it were haphazardly translated from another language. Here is an example, exactly as it is written in the text:

     "You live on a farm around her?" Marjoram says to Fremont as she sorts out papers into piles for stapling.
     "I do." He replies as he writes some notes down on the child's desk close to her, using the old inkwell attached to it. "You can make a ink out of berries, have I showed you this?"
     "No. I would love to try my hand at that. Do you print your own books with that ink?"
     "Yes, we do. We are the warehouse for such things."

There is plenty more where that came from. I could swear English isn't Grabe's native language, if not for the commentary she provides before and after the main story in which she clearly demonstrates a decent grasp of it.

Also, the writing is very murky. The characters often only hint at what is happening without actually showing us. They make frequent references to their past adventures despite the fact this is the first book in the series. And these adventures sound a lot more interesting than the events we actually see. Finally, the events we see are poorly communicated to us. I could never be completely certain what was happening.

Therefore, I cannot recommend Wild Marjoram. It's a poorly written story in a market already crowded with poorly written stories. But if you still want to read it, I'm including the link as usual.

Friday, July 19, 2013

Kindle Spotlight -- Dead Iron: The Age of Steam

Today we have the 2011 steampunk novel Dead Iron, the first book in the Age of Steam series by Devon Monk. Note: as with my recent review of Camera Obscura, this book is available on Kindle but I read the paperback version, which is cheaper.

The story takes place in Hallelujah, Oregon in the late 19th century. The town is enjoying prosperity due to the arrival of the railroad that will soon be connecting them to the rest of the country. However, not everyone is in good spirits. Protagonist Cedar Hunt has been cursed by a Native American god to become a werewolf during the full moon. During his first change he killed his brother (or so be believes) who had been cursed along with him. Out of guilt he ventured into self-imposed exile and eventually settled in Hallelujah where he now hires himself out as a tracker.

One day he hears the son of the local blacksmith has gone missing, and he sets off to see if he can find the boy. He soon realizes the disappearance was caused by the Strange, malevolent otherworldly bogeymen who sometimes cause trouble for humans. In order to track the Strange responsible, Cedar seeks out the help of the enigmatic Madder brothers who are both miners and tinkerers. They agree to provide him with a silver tuning fork which acts as a Strange dowsing rod. In return, though, they demand his help in finding the Holder, a mysterious device in the possession of nefarious railroad baron/dandy Shard LeFel. Cedar is also approached by local witch Mae Lindson who wants his help finding the man responsible for her husband's murder. She claims she can help cure his lycanthropy in return. Although intrigued by her offer, he cannot abandon the missing boy, so he declines. Mae decides to hunt for the murderer on her own, unaware her husband's death was only the beginning of a sinister plot against both her and the missing boy.

I really enjoyed Dead Iron. It's a serious page-turner with a strong story and a diverse cast. Werewolves, automatons, witches, Strange, and other mysterious supernatural characters will keep you hooked until the explosive and thoroughly satisfying finale. LeFel and his Strange henchmen are particularly intriguing.
I honestly could have kept reading this book all day. Although one scene towards the end tested my suspension of disbelief, on the whole the book is solid and leaves plenty of room for a sequel which Monk has since delivered on.

Monday, July 8, 2013

Kindle Spotlight -- Camera Obscura

Have you ever said to yourself, "Gee, steampunk is awesome, but I wish it had more chicks with Gatling gun arms and lizard guys like in the Super Mario Brothers movie"? Then Lavie Tidhar's novel, Camera Obscura, is for you! Note: although this book is available on Kindle, I read the paperback version.

The story takes place in 1893 Paris. A murder has been committed in the Rue Morgue. Arriving on the scene is Milady de Winter (who is black in this story), agent extraordinaire for the mysterious Quiet Council. After kicking the local police out, she proceeds to conduct her own investigation with the help of her robotic insect/pet Grimm. She discovers the corpse has been infected with a strange silvery substance. She has Grimm destroy the body--presumably as part of a cover-up on behest of the Council--and leaves. Unfortunately for her, this is just the beginning. More victims soon turn up, and the killings seem to be related to a set of jade statues with otherworldly properties. Everyone, from the Council to the English lizard men (did I mention the lizards conquered England?), to competing Chinese factions, wants to get their hands on the statues for their own agendas. Milady just wants to stop the murders, but that's not easy with her own allies betraying her at every step. Just what are these seemingly intelligent statues, and can Milady stay alive long enough to find out?

I have a few problems with an otherwise strong story. First--de Winter is not a very likable character. She callously bullies her way through murder investigations she may or may not even have jurisdiction over. She threatens people, she destroys evidence, and is so intent on getting answers she has the body of one of the murder victims mutilated and forces the dead woman's daughter to look at it to shock her into coughing up what she knows. She never shows any remorse for these actions. Therefore, when Milady is brutally tortured later in the story, I did not feel bad for her.
Also, the exact nature of the Council she works for is never explained. They clearly wield power of some kind but Tidhar doesn't let us in on it. From start to finish they are mostly a group of amoral Illuminati types barking orders. The story is told from the point of view of their best agent, so I don't see why she couldn't take a paragraph to sum it up for us.
Another problem, albeit one that is not directly tied in with the plot, is Tidhar's habit of having the next character speak while still on the same paragraph. Milady will finish speaking, and another person will immediately say something on the very same line. Since you can still tell when another character begins speaking, it's not confusing so much as jarring. Still, it comes off as unprofessional (at least, to me).

If you can get past all that, you'll find an engaging narrative filled with colorful characters. Throughout her journey, Milady encounters, in one form or another, a spattering of historical and literary figures, such as Victor von Frankenstein, Nikola Tesla, the Marquis de Sade, Dr. Moreau and Buffalo Bill Cody. The locales in the story are even more compelling. From 19th century Paris, to an underwater city, to the Chicago World's Fair, I'd say these places are the real star of the book.



Monday, June 17, 2013

Kindle Spotlight -- The Dark Victorian: Risen

Today we have a Victorian adventure by Elizabeth Watasin, The Dark Victorian: Risen. This is the first book in the Dark Victorian series.

Jim Dastard is not your usual detective. In fact, he's a talking disembodied skull who works for the Secret Commission, a government bureau that resurrects people from the dead and sends them to fight other eldritch threats to England. His latest partner is Artifice, a tall, statuesque woman recently brought back from the dead. The resurrected agents of the Commission have their memories erased at the beginning of their second life, so Art (as she comes to be called) has no idea who or what she was prior to her death. However, her new form does have certain advantages, like the ability to fly and become incorporeal, as well as superhuman strength and endurance. She'll need these advantages if she and Jim Dastard are to stop the villain who's been reanimating the dead and using them to commit murder throughout London.

The Dark Victorian: Risen provides a refreshing change to the steampunk formula. Art and Jim Dastard make a colorful duo and play off each other's quirks very well, and I even found the villain to be (somewhat) sympathetic. There isn't a whole lot of character development since, as I said, the agents of the Commission have amnesia and don't even know who they are--or were. Tantalizing hints regarding Art's past are provided via women who obviously know who she was, but Watasin has obviously chosen to save big revelations for later volumes.

There is one significant caveat which may turn off readers. The female characters are not shy about showing their attraction to one another, and lesbians abound in this story. If that doesn't bother you (or if you're a hotblooded male), by all means pick up The Dark Victorian: Risen. You'll find an engaging story within.


Monday, April 29, 2013

Bargain Bin Spotlight -- Washington's Dirigible

Recently I was in an antique store here in town and came across a 1997 novel which caught my interest, and since it was only a dollar I picked it up. The book is Washington's Dirigible by John Barnes.

The story is told from the point of view of Mark Strang, who was a college professor until he saw his family murdered by the Closers, bad guys from a multitude of timelines who want to impose their will on the multiverse. Strang finds himself recruited by the ATN, a federation of timelines fighting to stop the Closers. He becomes a member of Crux Ops and sent on his first mission to a timeline the ATN has cultivated; you see, instead of raising armies in this war, both sides raise timelines to a certain technological level to be their allies in the war. Strang is transported to an alternate 1775 Boston where he arrives just in time to see another version of himself go on a shooting spree. This evil Mark Strang seems hellbent on wreaking havoc, but why? Fortunately, historical figures like George Washington and John Paul Jones are there to lend a helping hand and shut down the Closers in that timeline.

This book is a real gem. Not only is it dripping with steampunk (which arguably was still in its infancy when this book was written), but the story is gripping as well as funny. Since the story is told from a first-person perspective, we're always inside Strang's head. We not only witness his personal demons--he has to face the evil he could become-- but his sense of humor as well. He frequently delivers hilarious comments on topics ranging from the Closers, to the various time periods he finds himself in, to the numerous close calls he experiences. Also, Barnes dedicates whole passages to the science of airships, steam engines and time travel. He really has everything covered. Finally, the explosive climax brings it all to a satisfying conclusion.

If you ever get a chance, buy this book. You won't regret it. It's selling for literally one cent on Amazon.


Monday, April 1, 2013

The Revolution Beyond Time

Here is a preview of my upcoming novel, The Revolution Beyond Time, the third book in my Infini Calendar series.

Synopsis:
The year is 1889 (Infini Calendar). 12-year-old Nelly Flowers is traveling with her parents from New York to Wichita to participate in the Land Run. However, things take a frightening turn when their airship is attacked by pirates. As Nelly and her new companions discover, this is only the beginning of an adventure which will determine the future of the entire human race. Note: Sorry for any formatting errors. Blogger doesn't always want to cooperate when pasting from Word.



Chapter I: A New Journey Begins




New York City, April 15, 1889 (Infini Calendar), 10:00 a.m.
            Nelly Flowers accompanied her parents through the Buroker Building’s eighty-sixth floor. They checked in at the observation deck and then got into a special elevator which they rode to the massive building’s 102nd floor.
            “Say goodbye to New York,” George Flowers said as they rode up. “And good riddance.” Nelly’s father was a middle-aged man with tiny spectacles and an equally small mustache on his upper lip. His face could be described as slightly rotund but not exactly fat. He was a little overweight but overall not in bad health. Also, he wore a nondescript business suit and tie.
            “I just hope we’re making the right decision,” Margaret Flowers said. Nelly’s mother had light brown hair with a hint of blonde, pinned up in the back of her head. She wore a simple white dress, and although she was starting to get wrinkles, no one would describe her as an old woman. To Nelly, she was the epitome of beauty.
            “We both agreed: a new start is just what this family needs,” George said. Up until recently, he had been a banker, but economic difficulties caused him to be laid off. Because of this, he had become, in his own words, “dissatisfied with this whole blamed city.” In short: he no longer liked living in New York, and wanted a change. So now they were all going to some place called the Unassigned Lands to race for a new home. Nelly didn’t really understand why she had to go—she wasn’t a particularly fast runner—but she trusted her parents’ judgment.
            At the 102nd their tickets were checked at a pair of doors which led outside to the observation deck. Once outside, Nelly felt the wind ruffle her short auburn curls and she took in the magnificent view of New York City. Although metal railings lined the observation deck, she had no problem seeing the metropolis below them. All manner of buildings spread out below them; offices, factories, banks, restaurants and clubs were just some of the structures which made up New York.
            But it wasn’t just buildings that made the view so amazing. Countless airships filled the skies above the city. Speaking of airships—there was one docked at the observation deck, ready to take them to their new home. This one—a polished brown model—was one solid cylindrical piece, unlike the primitive vessels of the previous century which required a balloon for lift. No, the airships of today had much more sophisticated engines.
            The Flowers family carefully ascended the ramp of the Manhattan Dream and entered the cabin. Each section of the ship had two rows of seats. The Flowers found theirs in the middle of the vessel. George and Margaret’s seats were on the left, while Nelly sat across from them on the right in an aisle chair.
            As soon as she had her seat belt buckled, Nelly removed from her bag her most cherished possession. It was a book entitled The Amazing Story of Jeanne de Fleur. The book was about Nelly’s great-grandmother and France’s greatest hero. Jeanne had been a noblewoman who later become a knight and served the king and queen. In a tragic twist, however, they were all betrayed by bad guys. Jeanne was crushed, but persevered and managed to beat them with the help of her friends. Later, she came to America, saved the world, returned to France and fought the injustice of Napoleon Bonaparte. Finally, fifty years ago her family immigrated to New York. Nelly never got tired of reading about it, and had finished the book several times.
            A thought suddenly occurred to her. “These airships are safe, right?”
            “Of course,” her mother replied. “It’s not like the old days, when these things crashed all the time.”
            An alarm went off inside her. “Crashed?”
            “Don’t scare the girl, Margaret. This is the safest way to travel.”
            Nelly said, “I dunno if I can do this.”
            Fortunately, her father knew how to calm her. “You know, your great-grandmother flew in the first airships ever built, and she never got scared. Don’t you want to be brave like her?”
            “Of course!”
            He then said, “So how would Jeanne de Fleur handle this situation?”
            Nelly thrust her index finger forward. “She’d say, ‘Celeste—fire up the engine! We’re going to stop Robespierre! Full speed ahead!’”
            George smiled. “Atta girl!”
            Nelly was now sufficiently psyched up to go ahead with this trip.
            An elderly gentleman came down the aisle. He looked to be in his sixties, with a neatly trimmed grey beard, but he was physically fit. He wore a dark brown business suit similar to the one her father was wearing, although this man had a bowler hat atop his head.
            He stopped next to Nelly. “Excuse me. Do you mind if I get through? This is my seat,” he said very politely.
            “Oh! Yes,” Nelly replied. She scrunched into her seat so he could to his window seat. She noticed he was carrying a fancy wooden cane. Something about it seemed peculiar, but she couldn’t put her finger on it.
            “Thank you, young lady,” he said.
            “You’re welcome, Mr…”
            “Lazarus,” he said. “Michael Lazarus.”
            “That’s an interesting name,” George said.
            Margaret asked, “Are you from New York.”
            Michael shook his head. “Actually, I’m from Illinois.”
            “I visited there once,” George said. “Nice place.”
            Michael, smiling, said, “I like to think so.”
            A slightly tinny voice from the front of the cabin said, “This is your captain speaking. Today’s flight will take us from New York to Wichita, with a layover in Chicago. Flight time will be…”
            Nelly said, “Where’s Wichita?”
            “Kansas,” her mother replied.
            “Is that where the race is gonna be at?”
            “No,” George said. “The race will be in the stretch of land between Kansas and Texas. Right now it doesn’t really have a proper name, so they call it the Unassigned Lands.”
            Nelly turned to Michael Lazarus. “Are you going to be running in the race?”
            “As a matter of fact, I am. But I’m going to be using a horse.”
            “Isn’t that cheating?”
            Michael laughed, as did Nelly’s parents. “With that much land to cross, we can’t go on foot. So we’re also going to be using horses,” George explained.
            Nelly was glad. She thought she’d have to pump her legs all across the Unassigned Lands.
            “At this time I must ask you all to fasten your seatbelts for departure.”
            A loud whine could be heard as the airship started up, followed by a rumbling. The Manhattan Dream slowly lifted off the observation deck and sailed into the New York sky.
            Nelly looked out the window as the buildings flew past them, slowly at first and then with gradually more speed. She silently said goodbye to her life in the big city, and tried to imagine what lay ahead.
            She honestly had no idea.

* * *

Chicago, Illinois, April 15, 1889 (Infini Calendar), 10:15 a.m.
            The telegram read as follows:

PERSON IN QUESTION WILL ARRIVE TODAY—

LOOK FOR PRIDE OF MANHATTAN

NOON—

            She folded the paper and put it in her pocket.
            She smiled. Everything was lining up perfectly. There hadn’t been any changes to the airship schedule, so all she had to do was wait for the vessel to arrive and board it. Then, she just needed to stick close to the target and hope the rats came for their cheese.

Chapter II: The Hostile Sky




Chicago, Illinois, April 15, 1889 (Infini Calendar), 12:10 p.m.
            The Manhattan Pride landed on the observation deck of the fiftieth floor of the Adina Building in Chicago. Every major city had a structure for airship docking, and Chicago was no exception.
            Most of the passengers took this opportunity to disembark and stretch their legs before the final journey to Wichita. Some got food from various vendors on the fortieth floor after taking the elevator down, while others simply explored while waiting for the Manhattan Pride to finish refueling.
            Nelly and her parents sat down at a table in the fortieth floor’s atrium, surrounded by food vendors hawking various dishes from their carts. George had gotten some meat loaf, Margaret a salad, and Nelly a slice of pizza (it was Chicago, after all). George sat across from Nelly, and Margaret sat to Nelly’s right.
            They had scarcely sat down when a young woman (perhaps twice as old as Nelly) with short black hair approached their table. She wore a dark brown duster coat with matching cowboy hat, black pants and a grey buttoned-up shirt. Nelly thought the masculine outfit was unsuited for such a pretty woman. “Excuse me,” she said with an accent Nelly didn’t recognize. “Are you waiting for the Manhattan Pride to depart?”
            “Yes, young lady, we are,” George replied.
            “Can you show me where it is when you go back? I have a ticket but I’m afraid I’m not familiar with this building.”
            George smiled and said, “Sure, no problem.”
            The mystery woman smiled too, but it was the smile of a snake, Nelly thought. She was sure this person was up to something.
            The cowgirl sat down at a table a few feet behind Nelly. The twelve-year-old whispered to her father, “Watch your wallet around her.”
            George laughed. “Will do.”
            Margaret whispered, “What was that accent?”
            “I think it’s Austrian,” George said. “I worked with a man in New York who was from Austria.”
            “Do you think she’s a Ranger?” Margaret said.
            “I doubt it. I didn’t see a badge on her.”
            Michael Lazarus came over and sat at a table a few feet behind Margaret. “Hello again, folks.”
            “Hello,” Nelly said. George and Margaret also greeted him.
            Michael began eating a baked potato. “They certainly have good food here in the Windy City.”
            “That they do,” George agreed.
            “Mr. Lazarus,” Nelly said, “why are you going to the Unassigned Lands? Did you lose your job too?”
            “You could say that,” Michael replied cryptically.
            George finished the last bite of his meatloaf. “What kind of work did you do?”
            Michael was silent for a moment. Finally he said, “Management.”
            “In New York?” George said.
            “Here and there.”
            “Huh.” Nelly’s father was obviously put off by the other man’s way of dodging the question of what exactly he had done for a living.
            “Are you going to become a rancher once you’ve staked a claim in the Territory?” Margaret said.
            “Perhaps. All I know is, I won’t be in management anymore, and that suits me just fine.”
            The PA system in the building suddenly came to life. “All passengers on the Manhattan Pride, please return to the airship for final departure to Wichita.”
            “That’s us,” George said.
            “Nelly, you didn’t eat the crust on your pizza,” Margaret chided.
            “I don’t like the crust.”
            “That’s no excuse. George, tell her to finish her crust.”
            “Finish your crust.”
            Nelly stuffed the remaining food into her mouth. It wasn’t very lady-like, but she didn’t have time to practice proper etiquette.
            The cowgirl joined them. “Good—now you can show me where to go.”
            George motioned for her to follow. “Right this way, young lady.”
            “Much appreciated.” She was all smiles, but Nelly didn’t like her. Ever since she had arrived, Nelly couldn’t shake the feeling this strange woman had had her eyes on the pre-teen. Of course, why that would be, Nelly had no idea.
            The flowers, Michael Lazarus and the cowgirl went back to the Manhattan Pride. The latter checked in at the gate under the name Cherry Bishop.
            “Are you also looking to stake a claim, Ms. Bishop?” George asked as they walked up the ramp to board the airship.
            “Oh, no; I’m here on official government business?”
            “You work for the government?”
            “That’s right.”
            Michael asked, “Are you in law enforcement? Judging by your outfit—”
            She cut him off. “I’m afraid I’m not at liberty to say what exactly I do.” She game him a sly look. “You are in the same position, I think.”
            He seemed to be caught off-guard by her comment. “Me? I’m retired.”
            Cherry Bishop said something under her breath. No one else seemed to hear it, and even Nelly wasn’t quite sure what she said. But it sounded like “We’ll see about that.”
            They returned to their seats, and Cherry Bishop found hers, coincidentally, directly behind Nelly. The twelve-year-old was uneasy at having the mystery woman so close to her for the duration of the flight, but there was nothing she could do about it but sit there.

* * *

At around 1:30 p.m., the captain informed everyone they were now above Missouri and would arrive on time in Wichita.
            However, in the cockpit the co-pilot, Mike Falksen, suddenly said, “There’s an unidentified airship heading towards us.”
            That was never something a pilot wanted to hear. “They’re not transmitting an ID signal?”
            “No. Nothing.”
            He looked at the radar screen. The unknown vessel was about the same size as them, and approaching on an intercept course.
            He tried hailing them on his headset. “This is Captain Reynolds of the Manhattan Pride. Please identify yourself. Over.” Several moments passed in silence. Captain Reynolds repeated his request, but to no avail.
            “You think they’re pirates?”  Falksen asked.
            “Could be.”
            Ever since airships became had become mainstream, pirates had been using them to commit heinous crimes. Fortunately, commercial vessels were usually sufficiently equipped to deal with airborne villainy.
            “Should we increase speed?”
            “Do it.”

* * *

Nelly was thrust into her seat as the Manhattan Pride suddenly accelerated. “What’s going on?” she yelled.
            “It’s probably nothing,” George said, although he didn’t sound very convinced. “They probably just want to make sure we get to Wichita on time.”
            “This is your captain speaking. A minor problem has forced us to pick up speed briefly. There is nothing to worry about.”
            Margaret said, “See? Everything’s fine.”
           Nelly may have been just a kid, but she wasn’t buying it. She turned to Michael Lazarus and asked him, “What do you think is going on?”
            He shrugged. “It’s probably just what the pilot said. I wouldn’t worry.”

***

“It’s no good! At this rate, they’ll catch up to us in a few minutes,” Falksen said.
            Captain Reynolds was beginning to sweat. “These guys are fast for pirates. All right, tell Gunnery to get ready for some action.”
            Falksen nodded. He tuned his headset so he could speak with Gunnery below deck. “Guys, we’ve got an unknown airship inbound. Probably hostile. Gear up.”
            “Roger. What’s the ETA?
            “A few minutes at most. You’d better hurry.”

* * *

Below the passengers, on a separate deck, not quite big enough to stand up straight in, was Gunnery. The men down here were busy setting up the weapons needed to defend the airship: Gatling guns. The four chain-fed monsters had to be unboxed and put together only when the need arose, as it was dangerous having them prepped and loaded during flight.
            Once the Gatling guns were assembled, the barrels of each one were inserted into matching holes in the walls. This allowed the guns to fire outside without compromising the air pressure inside the ship. The holes had gears which allowed the former to rotate with the barrel.
            Soon the ammo was loaded and the guns were ready to go.

* * *

They all saw it about the same time: A beast of an airship, vermillion, with bulky engines on either side roaring to catch up with their prey. Plastered on its hull was a black skull, cracking and about to fall apart. The pirates’ emblem.
            “Dear Lord,” Margaret whispered. The other passengers echoed her fear.
            Nelly sat agape, unable to take her eyes on this vessel that hovered menacingly out the window to her right. “What’s going on?” she asked, unable to contain the alarm that was running rampant inside her. “Are we going to be robbed?”
            “I-It’ll be fine. These passenger ships have enough firepower to fight off pirates,” George said.
            As if to back up his words, a thunderous roar erupted below their feet. A blistering shower of bright metal exploded from the Manhattan Pride, its target the enemy airship.
            Her father came alive with equal force. “Ha! I told you. Those pirates don’t stand a chance.”
            But Michael Lazarus said, “No.”
            “What?” Nelly replied. She didn’t know what he was trying to say.
            However, within moments the source of his disappointment became painfully obvious. Except for chipped paint, the pirates’ airship appeared undamaged. “That’s impossible,” George gasped.
            “Believe it,” Michael said. “That’s an irodium hull.”
            “It can’t be! Only military vessels are allowed to use irodium.”
            “Those Gatling guns can fire off a thousand rounds a minute, and that airship out there simply shrugged it off. It’s irodium.”
            “What’s going to happen to us?” Nelly repeated, louder this time. She got out of her seat and buried herself in her mother’s arms.
            “Everything’s going to be fine,” Margaret said. “We won’t let anything happen to you.”
            A stewardess walked down the aisle. “Everyone, please remain in your seats.”
            Margaret said, “That’s a good idea, Nelly. We’ve got to buckle you back in.”
            “I want to stay with you!”
            Her mother nodded. “And you will. We’ll be right here with you.”
            No sooner had Nelly gotten her seat belt back on then the Manhattan Pride suddenly banked left. Margaret lost her balance and fell sideways, but George managed to catch her, and she was able to get secured back into her own seat.
            “This is certainly a bumpy ride!” Cherry Bishop said cheerfully. What’s wrong with her? Nelly asked herself. We might all die up here and she actually seems happy about it! Nelly, however, did not voice these thoughts, because the stress caused words to fail her.
            The airship climbed higher into the air for what seemed like minutes, and then dove sharply, and then banked right, all in an attempt to shake off their pursuers. It was all for nothing, however; the mystery airship stayed with them no matter what they did. Nelly, meanwhile, felt increasingly nauseous with every maneuver and change in acceleration.
            Michael Lazarus put a hand on her head. “Are you all right, child?”
            No, she wasn’t. She was scared out of her mind and sweating profusely. However, she knew she had to be strong like Jeanne de Fleur. “I-I’ll be fine,” she managed to say.
            There was an abrupt impact as something struck the hull. “What was that?” Margaret said.

* * *

“Docking clamps,” Captain Reynolds said. “They’re going to board us now.”
            “Helm’s not responding,” Falksen said.
            “Magnetic interference from the docking clamps. Just enough to keep us from moving around. Auto-pilot will still work.”
            “These guys are well-equipped for pirates. Only the military is supposed to have that kind of tech.”
            Reynolds sighed. “Lock the door.”
            “But sir—the passengers…!”
            “Are on their own. We don’t have any weapons in here. The idea is to stop the pirates before they come aboard, and clearly that’s failed.”
            But Falksen wasn’t so easily discouraged. “There must be something we can do!”
            Reynolds lit a cigarette and took a nice, long drag. “You want to go out there and fight them with no guns, be my guest. For all intents and purposes, this vessel is theirs now. Anything we try would only endanger the passengers further.”
            The co-pilot clearly wanted to argue further, but he knew Reynolds was right. The captain could see it in his eyes. So Falksen locked the cockpit door, and fell into his chair to await whatever fate had in store for them.

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